hopes and dreams

i wrote a new story today to send into Highlights Magazine!! this one actually uses people as the main characters instead of frogs, which i think will help my cause, but idk. but it might be a few weeks before i submit it anyways because i want other people to review it and tell me what i should make better and what should be changed and stuff. if you wanna read it click on the Fictionpress link to the right of my page and the story is called Last One Picked